I prefer the original title. Even when you do something cheesy for fun, it has an appeal. What it needs is a quality bit of melodic whistling. Listen to Peter, Bjorn and John's "Young Folks" and you'll see what I mean.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=51V1VMkuyx0
acoustica1
Thanks 1bl.
You know that I never find the time for playing....
You are right :original title and....12 tracks on the final version.
http://guitarlover.free.fr/-Musicbox-.mp3
Michael
Yeah, some good whistling could bring it all together. Not enough whistling these days. Not enough people called Bjorn either. I'd like to hear some deeper drums too.
1bassleft
I've listened to the bigger production :D
I do like the chintzy keyboard and, particularly, the 2nd guitar overlay near the start and at 2:10 - why such sparse use?
Also, once I noticed my legs going, I realized the rhythm's similarity to early 1980s ska. You could redo this completely (keeping the 1st guitar, drums and bass) but adding realistic trombone, a bit of Hammond and blarty sax for that "2-tone" sound. Check out The Selector to see what I mean:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A-xxTAJBuMs&feature=related
Maybe you should rename your song (again!) as Eskalator music. That's almost quite clever - did anyone see what I did there? :)